2010/09/30

My Friends

I like to make friends. Among those friends, I usually play with 5 friends. Hwang-Hyesong, Lee-Eunji, Son-Jayoung, Choi-Ayeon, and Jung-Minjae are them. I like them a lot. I will introduce them to you today.
First is Hyesong. She is very very pretty. She has big eyes, white, small face and she is very thin, but she is very strong. When she hits me, I feel terrible pain.
Second is Eunji. She is cute. She has big eyes too but not as big as Hyesong. She looks like a mouse little bit. Ha ha.. I might die if she heard this..;;;
Third is Jayoung. She and I are friends since we were 8 years old. She is pretty but she is very funny and strange. She often says some crazy words and act little bit crazy too. She is an eccentric person.
Next is Ayeon. She is really cute. She isn't tall which makes her more cute. She looks like a monkey so her nickname is monkey. Her grades are good.
Last is Minjae. She is kind but sometimes, she is like a baby. She is very thin and weak. She gives us cookies almost everyday. She always say that I'm cute, but I don't think so...
Well, I like these 5 friends a lot and I like other friends a lot. I want to grow deep friendship with them for a long time.

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  1. "I feel terrible pain" is not wrong grammatically, but it just sounds a bit awkward. Something like, it hurts me a lot or the pain lasts for awhile sounds much better.

    Also, "I might die if she heard this..." I think you mean she may hurt you if she read your post, right?

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